Well, I suppose that's true. But -

[ He orders a skewer of his own, now feeling a little hungry. ]

- lets put it this way. I believe about ninty nine percent of your story. The remaining one percent, will have to be said using that legendary two sword style of yours.

[ Which is cool to him. His order arrives and he raises it - ]

It sounds more samurai-esqe and straight out of a Kurosawa film that way, doesn't it?