Honor and the oaths therein is how I remain secure that even should the clans turn on each other, Izo and Majima will not have to go after me for the sake of orders.
[just saying, you might want to find a way to do that for yourself, since someone you care about is bound to another.]
But I digress. There's one more thing I want to raise as a potential point. Hopefully it needn't be addressed, but...
[this, this is where she needs her confidence to hold, even as her heart pounds in uncertainty. this is the part she decided on her own.]
In the future, if the Daitengu is to be unavailable for such discussions, if you have to act...you should have a second, to support you and ensure you aren't outnumbered in the talks.
[it's too forward to suggest herself. she's not a full lieutenant like him, and she's not the only member of the Alliance in her status - but she hopes, secretly, there's at least a consideration as someone sympathetic to his goals.]
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[just saying, you might want to find a way to do that for yourself, since someone you care about is bound to another.]
But I digress. There's one more thing I want to raise as a potential point. Hopefully it needn't be addressed, but...
[this, this is where she needs her confidence to hold, even as her heart pounds in uncertainty. this is the part she decided on her own.]
In the future, if the Daitengu is to be unavailable for such discussions, if you have to act...you should have a second, to support you and ensure you aren't outnumbered in the talks.
[it's too forward to suggest herself. she's not a full lieutenant like him, and she's not the only member of the Alliance in her status - but she hopes, secretly, there's at least a consideration as someone sympathetic to his goals.]