I think you're doing well enough that I can't think of anything you missed off the top of my head. I did want to talk to you about something though, if you have any room for more...
[ he smiles because he knows exactly how that sounds. ryouma sympathises though; he's also a little out of his depth and in a very strange place, so he understands the feeling very well. ]
iii.
[ he smiles because he knows exactly how that sounds. ryouma sympathises though; he's also a little out of his depth and in a very strange place, so he understands the feeling very well. ]
It ties into this though, so there's that.